Author Archives: Merrill

What’s the boy in the runaway balloon have to do with getting better results from your sales copy?

Think back to when you were three or four, maybe five years old…

Did your parents read stories to you each night?

Mine did, as I’m sure many others did.

All those bed-time stories were always so interesting, I couldn’t wait for them to read to me each night. And I think as we grow up, we’re predisposed to listening to a good story.

Which brings me to this…

You may have heard the story of the 6 year-old Colorado boy who held much of the nation glued to their TVs for two hours while watching in horror as a runaway balloon, with the boy supposedly inside, flew 7000 feet in the air for over 50 miles.

One person commented: “For two solid hours, I was completely captivated by this story as it unfolded”.

So you’re asking – “What’s this have to do with writing powerful sales copy that gets results?”

Actually…Everything!

You see, because people love a great story, some of the best sales copy ever written uses a story lead to command readership.

The key when using a story lead is to get the attention with your headline, then hook them with a story that literally captivates them, so much they can’t put it down until they’re done reading the copy.

Once they’re emotionally involved, you can literally persuade them to do what you want, as long as the offer and call-to-action is relevant and powerful.  

So – next time you’re trying to figure out what kind of lead to use in your copy, think about using a great story, and you’ll be pleasantly surprised by the results.

Any thoughts? I’d like to know.

To get more information about writing effective sales copy, about this post, marketing advice, or about my direct response copywriting services, e-mail me or call me at 603-686-5140.

And visit www.webcontentNH.com for help with Website design, writing SEO copy, e-mail marketing, or other online marketing strategies.

To your marketing success!

Merrill Clark
Website and Marketing Copywriter

What my blind friend can teach you about writing powerful sales copy

Last week, a friend of the family, who happens to be blind, stayed with me and my wife for a few days.

During her visit, we talked about many things including family, politics, and life in general.

I had just finished telling her all about my wife’s company’s summer outing aboard a chartered boat in Boston Harbor. I explained in detail all the highlights and even some of the non-highlights.

Then she said something that hit me right between the eyes. I call it one of my “duh” moments.

She said “Wow, Merrill – what a great time you must have had. As you told the story, I felt like I was there experiencing it for myself.”

Now, to be honest, I try to include a tad more detail about things when talking with her anyway, but her statement floored me.

What she said also applied to writing sales copy.

Engaging stories are proven to sell and generate interest, and one key to successful sales copy based on a story lead is to make your reader feel the experience and details just like they were there themselves.

People love stories, especially when they include vivid details, because it engages their feelings and emotions, then encourages them to take the action you want.

So get writing your next sales story today.

Any thoughts? I’d like to know.

To get more information about writing effective sales copy, about this post, marketing advice, or about my direct response copywriting services, e-mail me or call me at 603-686-5140.

And visit www.webcontentNH.com for help with Website design, writing SEO copy, e-mail marketing, or other online marketing strategies.

To your marketing success!

Merrill Clark
Website and Marketing Copywriter

Do you have specific business marketing goals?

What are your business marketing goals?

Sadly, many business professionals waste tons of money to advertise and run marketing campaigns – without even knowing what they want to to accomplish.

It always irks me when I talk with clients who’ve already talked with other marketing advisers, and in those discussions, they were never once asked what their marketing and business goals were.

As basic a question as it is, any responsible marketing advisor or copywriter will ask you about your goals. If they don’t – it’s a sure signal for you to move on and find someone who does.

If you, the business pro, don’t have any goals and aren’t sure what you specifically want your ads and marketing to do, it will be almost impossible to design a realistic action plan that will be worth a damn.

So, even without a set goal, you create a bunch of ads and plans on-the-fly. Then what?

Generally, you’re still won’t be sure if they worked or not, or if they were profitable or not.

How could you? There was no plan.

Bottom line is this:

Before you waste any of your hard-earned moolah on advertising or marketing, you must have marketing and advertising goals.

Then you develop a specific strategy plan that includes different tactics, which you’ll use as stepping stones to your ultimate business objective.

Only then – will you have enough information to determine if an ad or campaign was successful, or if you need to make additional changes to work towards your goal.

Plan and test!

Any thoughts? I’d like to know.

To get more information about writing effective sales copy, about this post, marketing advice, or about my direct response copywriting services, e-mail me or call me at 603-686-5140.

And visit www.webcontentNH.com for help with Website design, writing SEO copy, e-mail marketing, or other online marketing strategies.

To your marketing success!

Merrill Clark
Website and Marketing Copywriter

The only true guarantee in advertising

Today, you’re gonna learn a super-quick business advertising lesson.

Yep…it’s true!

There really is a solid guarantee in your advertising strategy, and I’ll clue you in shortly, but first a short story.

A client recently asked me this question:

“If I spend money on advertising – is there any guarantee I’ll get my investment back, and better yet, make a profit?”

After thinking about it for a second, (I wanted to respond with a semi-intelligent answer), my response was simply “Nope!”

You see, there’s simply no way anybody can guarantee the effectiveness or profitability of any ad or lead generation piece.

There are far too many variables that must be considered such as the target market, your message, the media, the effectiveness of the copy, and so on. That’s why you need to test each and every ad or marketing piece.

From that perspective, about the only guarantee a legitimate copywriter (such as myself) would give is that you’ll like the ad or sales copy, and that a copywriter’s sales copy has a way better chance of success than the typical business owner’s or ad agency’s copy.

Why? – Because the direct response copywriter uses methods that have been proven to work again and again (but not guaranteed to work every time).

Now… I know I said there was a guarantee, so here it is in a nutshell…

There is no way to guarantee you’ll get more business with your marketing and advertising, but…

It’s practically guaranteed if you don’t anything at all to market yourself and advertise your business – you won’t get new customers.

And that’s guaranteed!

Any thoughts?

I’d like to know.

To get more information about writing effective sales copy, about this post, marketing advice, or about my direct response copywriting services, e-mail me or call me at 603-686-5140.

And visit www.webcontentNH.com for help with Website design, writing SEO copy, e-mail marketing, or other online marketing strategies.

To your marketing success!

Merrill Clark
Website and Marketing Copywriter

Why you should use short, simple words in your sales copy

I want to share a quick, but important copywriting tip today.

When you write sales copy – no matter what media it will be used in – use as simple and small words as you can.  I’m sure you’ve heard the saying “keep it simple stupid” (KISS)…

Well…this applies to copywriting, too. Write your copy so that even an 8th grader can understand it. Your prospects will have different levels of understanding, even if you think they don’t.

So don’t use long complicated words when you can use a short, simple one instead.

For example, you can use person instead of individual – or use buy instead of purchase.

Many writers use complicated words in their copy, and the only thing that does is make them sound very literate and educated, which in itself isn’t bad, but the primary purpose of your copy is to persuade your prospect to take a certain action, not impress them with your knowledge of the English language.

The other thing to keep in mind is this – use some industry words or jargon your specific target market understands. (Just make sure your readers definitely know what that jargon means) They also need to believe you know what you’re talking about before they will trust you enough to be persuaded.

If your readers don’t understand your copy or don’t believe or trust you, your copy’s chance of success will be slim to none.

Any thoughts?

I’d like to know.

To get more information about writing effective sales copy, about this post, marketing advice, or about my direct response copywriting services, e-mail me or call me at 603-686-5140.

And visit www.webcontentNH.com for help with Website design, writing SEO copy, e-mail marketing, or other online marketing strategies.

To your marketing success!

Merrill Clark
Website and Marketing Copywriter

Is your sales copy too boring for your prospects to read?

Dunno about you – but I hate to read anything that bores me to tears.

However, I enjoy reading material that has a little pizzaz. You know – written by a person with a real personality, not a computer brain.

And most of people I know are in the same boat. It’s kind of nice to read an article, book, or newsletter that’s entertaining, and at the same time provides useful and valuable information.

Ding -Ding-Ding- Tip Alert***** Did you pick up on the valuable copywriting tip I just gave you?

If you didn’t…that’s ok. I’ll clue you in, anyway, just cuz I want you to succeed.

The tip is:

The truth is… nobody likes to read anything boring and this is especially true when it comes to reading sales copy.

I’m talking about copy in your space ads, postcards, direct mail, web copy, email promos, and whatever other media you might use.

So…keep this fact in mind every time you write any sales copy for any media.

Remember – it’s your prospects that read your ads, not robots, but real, honest to goodness people. Don’t be afraid to inject a little personality in your materials. Your prospects are people, too.

Good stories are a great way to engage your prospects.

Plus, it’s been proven that people who enjoy reading sales copy have more of a tendency to act on your offer. Obviously, if it’s too boring, it won’t get read at all, and if that happens, you definitely aint getting a sale!

Some of you are probably wondering about using humor.  You can use humor, too, just be very careful when you do. Some experts say when you offend people, you lose them for good.

But other copywriting experts find that if you’re so careful with your copy to not offend anyone – your copy will be weak because it won’t engage anyone. Personally, I tend to favor this point of view,

Think about it…no matter what you do or say, there’s always going to be someone that doesn’t like you, or what you have to say. And you don’t want those types of people for clients anyway.

Promise yourself – Just say NO to Boring Copy!

So starting today write your headlines and sales copy that sing with excitement and personality. (Not to be confused with boring stories or never-ending babble)

What do you think about this technique?

I’d like to know.

To get more information about writing effective sales copy, about this post, marketing advice, or about my direct response copywriting services, e-mail me or call me at 603-686-5140.

Also visit www.webcontentNH.com for help with Website design, writing SEO copy, e-mail marketing, or other online marketing strategies.

To your marketing success!

Merrill Clark
Website and Marketing Copywriter

Why personalized direct mail copy works better

Do you want to get better results from your direct mail campaigns?

Try using personalization.

Now – keep in mind – personalization can take on many forms and meanings.

My meaning is simple: It’s the words and offer you use to generate leads and sales. Words that show the reader you’re talking specifically with them.

It can be as simple as using their real names in the salutation of the sales letter, or as complicated as writing about a previous purchase they made and how your new gizmo will make their previous purchase work a million times better.

Even better yet, using their name, telling how your gizmo will help their life, and making an irresistible offer…just for them. One they just can’t refuse!

A personal letter shows them you know what they like, and you care about them getting the most out of their investment in other products.

Basically – personalization shows your reader that you know them. I mean – that’s about as personal as you can get.

When creating your offers and writing the sales copy, be as personal as you can, ( I guess you could take that to the extreme, but don’t) and you could boost results by 20-30% – maybe even more depending on the quality of your list and the relevance of your product or service to them.

Remember…consumers (and that includes business people, too) deal with people, not robots or companies.

So first and foremost, write for people and give it the personal touch. I think you’ll be glad you did.

Oh…and by the way…personalization also works just as well, if not better, with a combination of email and website marketing!

What do you think about this technique?

I’d like to know.

To get more information about writing effective sales copy, about this post, marketing advice, or about my direct response copywriting services, e-mail me or call me at 603-686-5140.

Also visit www.webcontentNH.com for help with Website design, writing SEO copy, e-mail marketing, or other online marketing strategies.

To your marketing success!

Merrill Clark
Website and Marketing Copywriter

A killer ad style that almost always out-pulls traditional ads

 

 Did you know there’s one type of ad
that’s been proven to generate as much as 500% more response than traditional space ads you see every day?

 

And you can use it for ads in your local newspaper, magazines, or even a postcard campaign.

So what is it?

It’s called an advertorial style ad.

And its name to fame is this:

It is part ad and part editorial (you know, like the newspaper columns).

When it’s formatted like the rest of the paper, it will actually look more like an article than an ad.

And that’s the beauty of it. Studies show that up to 500% more people read the articles than the ads.

So the trick (it isn’t really a trick) is to write an ad that looks like an article.

People like articles, and if they also trust the contents of an article much more than ads. Face it – ads are an obvious attempt to sell something…articles aren’t.

Using the same font, size, columns – just like the paper or magazine you’re putting it in. And the size can be anywhere from 1 or 2 paragraphs to filling up a whole page.

But make sure you have a powerful and compelling headline (just like any article) so it will be read.

Some of the successful ones look so much like real articles, the paper or magazine will require you to put “Advertisement” at the very top of it.

The other secret ingredient is using copy that doesn’t blatantly sell your product or service, but that persuades the reader to take a specific action such as calling for a free report, emailing you, or visiting a website.

Plus – it’s super effective for a multi-step lead generation tool, getting them to contact you so you can follow up with them. It sure beats the heck out of cold calling for prospects.

Considering how powerful advertorial style ads are, you don’t see them too often. The funny thing is – just maybe, you see some – but you don’t even realize they are ads.

So next time you consider placing an ad in a newspaper or magazine, think about how you will use the advertorial style to boost your response more than ever before.

What do you think about this technique?

I’d like to know.

To get more information about writing effective sales copy, about this post, marketing advice, or about my direct response copywriting services, e-mail me or call me at 603-686-5140.

Also visit www.webcontentNH.com for help with Website design, writing SEO copy, e-mail marketing, or other online marketing strategies.

To your marketing success!

Merrill Clark
Website and Marketing Copywriter

How to use joint ventures to boost sales in your local business

A powerful marketing tactic – Joint ventures – can significantly boost your sales and profits – no matter what kind of business you have.

But for some reason, it’s not often used for local businesses. It is used frequently by Internet marketers to market their products to other Internet marketer’s customer and prospect lists.

Here’s how Joint Ventures could work for your local business:

Find a business whose existing customers would be ideal buyers of your products, most likely
a business selling a complimentary product or service to yours.

Approach the owner and ask if you could send an email, postcard, or sales letter to his list promoting your product or service.

In exchange, you’d give him a percentage of the profits on sales you make. It just needs to be a percentage high enough to make it worth his while.

The, you could go the other way and let him market his goods to your house list and give you a percentage of profits.

The great thing here is it’s easy, you can set up deals with more than one business, you can quickly and inexpensively increase your own customer list and boost profits.

And in order for it to work…the deal has to be structured so it’s a win-win for both parties.

All you have to do is track the sales you make using their list, and pay him his percentage.

Pretty simple, huh?

For example: If you’re a jeweler, maybe you’d contact florists, high end restaurants, country clubs, well – you get the idea.

So get started making some quick and easy cash!

What do you think about this technique?

I’d like to know.

To get more information about writing effective sales copy, about this post, marketing advice, or about my direct response copywriting services, e-mail me or call me at 603-686-5140.

Also visit www.webcontentNH.com for help with Website design, writing SEO copy, e-mail marketing, or other online marketing strategies.

To your marketing success!

Merrill Clark
Website and Marketing Copywriter

Generate more leads with direct response space ads

Never make another cold call again!

By using the technique I’m going to tell you about in a second, you’ll have more qualified leads calling you than you can shake a stick at.

Now doesn’t that sound a heck of a lot easier than sitting in front of your phone, cold-calling people you don’t know to sell them products they’re probably not interested in anyway? Just so you can hear “I’m not interested”.

So you’re ready to put a new ad in the Yellow Pages, your local newspaper, or maybe a magazine that a lot of your ideal prospects read.

But you don’t quite know what the ad should say, so you look at some of your competitor’s ads and start typing away, modeling theirs.

Most ads display the company name in the biggest font size; maybe add a picture, and some bullet points that list the features and specs of the product or services offered, and the phone number.

Another words – except for the company name – all the ads look alike and they say all the same boring things.

The only problems are 1) there is no way which ad to respond to because they’re all pretty much the same, and 2) because of #1, they usually don’t work.

So what are you supposed to do to get some responses from your ads?

 

Generate highly qualified leads with direct response ads

Instead, try this simple, time-proven lead generation tactic. (and you don’t have to lift a finger to dial the phone, either)

Create a short informational report (2-4 pages) that you can give away to your prospects that contact you. This could be tips on selecting the best ‘whatever your product’ is, or mistakes to avoid when they buy a ‘whatever your product’ is.

Write your ad using a headline that asks a question or implies a big benefit to them for contacting to get your free report. If the headline is really good, it’ll make your prospects feel like they must have that report to make a good decision. (The sole purpose of the ad is to get them to contact you for the free report, not to directly sell your goods – you can do that in the report and the follow up.)

Make sure to provide all the ways to contact you including your phone number, email address, fax number, website address (preferably a special landing page for tracking response).

Send out the report to them immediately after they contact you.

Wait a few days and start a follow up campaign of phone calls, (now you can because they’re not cold calls any more – you know they are interested in your goods).

Maybe send a newsletter, then maybe a brochure or a postcard. Whatever you can “drip” to them to stay at the top of their mind.

Here’s a quick example: (just for fun – let’s use a mortgage broker named MB)

Mr. MB writes a 3 page report titled “The 7 Costliest Mistakes Most People Make When Refinancing Their Homes).

It tells what they are with a paragraph or two about each point. At the end of it, Mr. MB describes how he makes sure every one of his clients completely avoid these mistakes, keeping them out of hot water with the IRS and their accountants, and to contact him so he can help them, too.

 

His newspaper ad is this:

Free Report Shows The 7 Costliest Mistakes
People Make When Refinancing Their Homes

Get your report by calling 800-111-2222 right now to find out
how you can avoid making these mistakes
that could literally cost you thousands of dollars.

Okay – if you were refinancing your house, wouldn’t you want to find out if you were making any of these mistakes? I know I would.

 

It should get better response than this one I recently saw (for real, names changed to protect the innocent).

ACME Mortgage Company
Call us at 800-800-800

Lowest rates
New homes
Refinances
Quick turnaround
Best service around

 

Now – assuming you didn’t use ad #2, you have a way better chance of having warm leads to follow up with, and now it’s up to you to sell ’em.

The really cool thing about this technique is you can also use it in any kind of ads, postcard marketing, website sales pages, email marketing and a ton of other places.

What do you think about this technique? Have you used it or another successfully?

Let me know.

To get more information about writing effective sales copy, about this post, marketing advice, or about my direct response copywriting services, e-mail me or call me at 603-686-5140.

Also visit www.webcontentNH.com for help with Website design, writing SEO copy, e-mail marketing, or other online marketing strategies.

To your marketing success!

Merrill Clark
Website and Marketing Copywriter